Indistinct,
blurring out as I accelerate,
forcing me, the wrong way,
Acclivity leading to infinity,
Transcending all limits.
In retrospect,
Life in the past,
threw light to queries unanswered,
Acclivity leading to infinity,
Transcending all limits.
But, I am here now,
gently clearing off them,
through illusions and visualisations,
Acclivity leading to infinity,
Transcending all limits.
Polishing to the apex of its lusture,
Shaping it to near unity,
with best use of seconds,
though, not the very best,
Acclivity leading to infinity,
Transcending all limits.
As I progress,
I am aware,
Tint of maturity in immaturity,
transforming into,
Tint of immaturity in maturity,
Acclivity leading to infinity,
Transcending all limits.
Life redefined?
Redefined,
seemingly distinct,
but blurd,
and blurd,
and I resist,
Acclivity leading to infinity,
Transcending all limits.
Friday, March 09, 2007
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26 comments:
Hey ppl, jus try to make out, what am i speaking about!
VERY GOOD POST:)
@Kaylee:
Thanks a lot. And take care.
OKAY WILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:P
Man that was amazingly brilliant...Well eevryone here speak abt life trying to define, trying to redefine, trying to understand, trying to analyze, trying to picturize, trying to life atlast...:)
Tint of maturity in immaturity,
transforming into,
Tint of immaturity in maturity,
those were beautiful lines...
hey that was trying to *live* atlast...:D
hey..a request..pls switch off ur word verification option in ur comment box:)
@Jeya Anand:
Thanks man. Yup! Everybody these dayz, trying to picturize life!
And ya, dat word verification is to prevent SPAM comments.:-)
yup..this is the time..to learn abt life..bcoz from birth to 20, you live by what others say and teach...and after 20, theres no others...all u have to is live on urs...we have to...:) Being 20 is just like imprinting our footsteps on another world...:)
And do the spams really bother ur blog??I have no such probz:)
My eyes strain a lot trying to figure out those bizzare words:D
@Jeya ANAND:
Hm.. Good way, u deciphered that poem! Anywayz! Different ppl hav different opinionz!
And ya, Spams were bothering me initially. After dis word verification stuff was incorporated, there has been no probs.
Thanx for droppin by my blog! A nice poem here i see.,great..
@annie:
Thanks a lot. :-)
Hey..so why have you restricted your limits??
@Jeya Anand:
Just 4 a change :-):-)
Thanks for droppin bi Ravi. u seem to have a nice blog.
Wud come and read your blog in detail soon!!!
Blogrolling ya!!!!
Cheeies
@Ashu:
Thanks. :-)
wow nice one!
Keshi.
@Keshi:
Thank u..
u write deep stuff Ravi...:)
Keshi.
Beautiful.
thanks
wow, deep stuff.
Anyways, I have tagged you :D
Do see my blog for details.
disappeared?
@Keshi:
Hm.. It's seemingly deep. Anywayz! Thanks.
@Kulpreet:
Thanks:-)
@Lavanya:
U've tagged me!! Hm.. I'll check out.
@Ashu:
Once I am back in college, i find it tough to make it to Blogger:-)
Where have you lost ?
My 1st time here, anyway nice blog.
Keep it up...
@Ashu:
I m quite busy with college stuff. So jus couldnt frequent the net.
@What a life:
Thanks..
Nice piece of poetry there!And a good blog :)
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